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Phrasing practice first & second pass
Romans 1:1-7
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Published November 3rd, 2021
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Can someone please give feedback on my phrasing as I’m not sure if I’m doing it  correctly
Can someone please give feedback on my phrasing as I’m not sure if I’m doing it correctly
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Romans 1:1-7
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Paul, ... called
a servant
of Christ Jesus,
to be an apostle,
set apart
for the gospel
of God,
which he promised beforehand through his prophets
in the holy Scriptures,
concerning his Son,
who was descended
from David according
to the flesh
and was declared to be the Son
of God
in power according to the Spirit
of holiness by his resurrection
from the dead,
Jesus Christ our Lord,
through
whom we have received grace
and apostleship to bring about the obedience
of faith
for the sake
of his name among all the nations,
including you
who are called
to belong
to Jesus Christ,
To all those in Rome
who are loved by God
and called
to be saints:
Grace to you
and peace
from God
our Father
and the Lord Jesus Christ.
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Comments
Ari Constancio
Brandon, some of your phrases may be further divided ("through his prophets" (2a), "according to the Spirit" (4c), "by his resurrection" (d), "to bring about the obedience" (5b), "among all the nations" (5e), etc.)
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